Subject: Proposed revisions to MSA and Order Form #MRG-2026-01
Hi Acme team,
Thank you for sending over the MSA package for InsightOps. We reviewed the agreement and are aligned on the commercial intent, but there are several provisions we need to rebalance before we can finalize.
Our main comments are below:
1. Liability and indemnity
- The current liability framework is materially one-sided. Vendor liability is capped, while several Customer obligations are effectively uncapped.
- The Customer indemnity is broader than we can accept, particularly where it extends to ordinary use of the service and our products/services generally.
- We also need a more practical Vendor IP indemnity that covers the contracted service as implemented, including standard integrations and Vendor-provided configurations.
2. Data rights and IP
- We need to narrow Vendor's rights in Customer Data so they are limited to providing and supporting the service, with any benchmarking/product improvement based only on de-identified aggregated data.
- Customer-specific deliverables, configurations, dashboards, and implementation artifacts should either belong to Customer or be licensed to us on a perpetual basis for continued use and transition.
- The feedback assignment should be converted to a limited license and should not capture our confidential information or business methods.
3. Security and privacy
- We need stronger security commitments, including a fixed breach-notice deadline, subprocessor notice/objection mechanics, and access to current independent security reports.
- The current DPA language expressly omits several standard protections, which we need to address in the contract set.
4. SLA and service remedies
- The SLA credits are too low relative to the operational impact of downtime and should not be the exclusive remedy for chronic or severe failures.
- We need a termination right if uptime misses recur over a defined measurement period.
5. Renewal, pricing, and payment
- The 15-day non-renewal window is too short, and the 20-day price increase notice creates a timing issue. Any renewal increase needs to be capped and disclosed before the non-renewal deadline.
- We also need to revise the suspension and late-payment language so service cannot be suspended for disputed amounts or on only 5 days' notice.
- The usage true-up should be based on a fixed contractual rate, not then-current list price applied retroactively.
6. Termination and exit
- We need to remove fee acceleration for early termination and add a practical off-ramp if the service is not meeting requirements.
- Post-termination data access should be extended, not conditioned on payment of disputed amounts, and accompanied by reasonable transition assistance.
7. Dispute process
- We would prefer a more balanced dispute mechanism than mandatory New York arbitration with prevailing-party fee shifting.
If helpful, we can turn comments quickly on a redline. We are aiming to close this promptly, but we will need the above points addressed so the agreement reflects a workable long-term SaaS relationship.
Thanks,
Meadow Retail Group LLC
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